Published August 16, 2011
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Hi there!
This was a really good poem. I like the structure, how you made the text centered. It's very original. Your spelling and grammer is good, so no worries there. I like the flow of this poem too. It has a very calm and soft tone, which is quite appropriate seeing as it's about a sunset, yes? The picture is very nice too. Did you take that or find it somewhere? It's nice.
Again, good job! Keep writing!
wow amzing i don't really understand the pic go's perfect with what you're were saying keep doing you're thing
This isn't bad. The picture goes nicely with the poem. I don't really understand why it wasn't in stanzas and stuff. The setup made it seem a bit like a short story. Anyway, this has good emotion and sort of like, good symbolism, amd everything. I like it. Hopefully, my review helps. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.