Published August 16, 2011
You went back home
All I can do is roam
while writing the poem
ooooommmmmmmm
Uttering a buddhist chant
Meditating by a dying plant
Inside an abandoned Tent
oooooooommmmmmmm
"Grande Amore" never ends
Cause' it's more than being friends
It's the love between I and Her
like a bird wrapped inside a fur
ooooooommmmmmmmmmm
Feeling the warmth of Trust
sending away all the lust
true love is all just
Believing in it is a "MUST"
Noureddine
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Hi there!
Very creative. You imagery is great and I can imagine everything you're saying. The rhyme scheme is good as well. It didn't seem forced and it flowed well with the reat of the poem.
This is a really good poem. I like the title.
It should be 'me and her', not 'I and her'
Again, great job with this. Keep writing!
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