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Hi there! I would comment on the grammer errors I found, but it looks like jayleighsmith already took care of that, so I'm going to comment on the content of ...

Hi there! So, there's two reasons I decided to read this: 1. It's about Harry Potter 2. I liked the title. I read this through and really enjoyed it! It ...

Hi there! This story was a very interesting read. You did a good job with moving along the story and because of this I wanted to keep reading it. I ...

Hi there! This is a good poem. Like iceblender said, I liked the confusing aspect of this poem. When I was reading through it there were parts where I just ...

Hi there! Wow, this is great, really amazing. You did an excellent job with this! It flows real well and tells a great story. There's a ton of emotion and ...

Hi there! This is a great poem. I really enjoyed reading it. It was written very well and there aren't any spelling or grammer errors I could find. It also ...

Hi there! Wow, this is a great poem, I enjoyed reading it! You did a great job keeping the piece rhythmic and flowing. It sounds great and has a definite ...

Hi there! My corrections/comments are in red below: She had been crying all night But, never let him know. She had been thinking of him all day But, never let ...

Hi there! This is a really great poem. I really, really enjoyed reading it. Sometimes when major things happen in our life it brings out the best in us. It ...

Hi there! I enjoyed reading your poem. It flowed very well and I couldn't find any spelling or grammer errors. You did a good job adding imagery and background information ...

Hi there! This is a very good poem. You did a great job telling the story and you broke up the stanzas in just the right places. I like the ...

Hi there! I enjoyed reading your poem. It's written fairly well and you did a great job getting your point across. You put a lot of emotion into this. There ...

Hi there! This is a very good poem, I enjoyed reading it! You had great emotion and imagery. It flows really well and has a great rhythm to it. I ...

Hi there! My comments/corrections are posted below in red . its it's a random piece of stuff a collection of words struggling to make sense creating a meaning finding... searching ...

Hi there! I really enjoyed reading this poem. It's written very well and flows well. You did a great job with making your words work with the point you're trying ...