Noelle

Hi there! First off, let me say that this is a great poem. You seemed to have put quite a lot of thought into this. There's great imagery and emotion ...

Hi there! Wow, this is a great! I can definitely feel the oodles of emotion in this. You did a great job getting inside the father's head. I like how ...

Hi there! My comments are in red : Because I was crying, crying softly With the word 'beacause' at the beginning here it gives us the impression that there was ...

Hi there! Wow...this poem is great! I love how you took the colors of the world and put them together into one poem. Your imagery is great (obviously because this ...

Hi there! Before I start the review, I would just like to say that this is a brilliant poem.*Presses the like button* You did a great job displaying your emotions ...

Hi there! Wow. That's really all I need to say, wow. This is great! I loved it so much I read through it about three or four times! It's written ...

Hi there! My comments are in red . I hope I don't sound harsh in my review! The warmth that you provide with just one hug, that is capable of ...

Hi there! My comments are in red : If I thought this would happen, I wouldn't have let you sit by me that day. If I thought this would happen, ...

Hi there! I really, really enjoyed reading this! It flowed really well and had a definite rhythm to it. You imagery was great and the emotion you put into it ...

Hi there! I was reading through this and I was thinking, this is exactly how I feel! I totally agree with everything you wrote in this poem. This poem is ...

Hi there! This is a great poem. You did a good job making it flow and keeping up the rhythm. You put a lot of emtion into this and your ...

Hi there! I think this is a great start. You reeled me in right from the beginning. This chapter reminded me of Aladdin, which is good because it's my favorite ...

Hi there! Wow, this was a great idea! I have never heard of someone re--writing old nursery rhymes. I'm impressed that you came up with the idea! :) I liked ...

Hi there! I really enjoyed this story. I'm always impressed when I read a story like this because I've tried to write flash fiction and failed. It's very hard to ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS! I liked this poem. It's simple and easy to read/understand which is a good thing! The flow of this piece is great and I couldn't ...