Noelle

Hi there! I'm here to review as requested. I want to start off by saying that you are a great story teller. The plot is amazing so far and I ...

Hi there! From reading the previous comments, I've assumed that you've edited this a couple times. So I'll tell you it looks great. I took the suggestions well and incorporated ...

Hi there! So here's how my reviews work: I make a review sammich. Yes, sammich. Basically I tell you what I liked about it, share my criticisms or suggestions, and ...

Hi there! I just have one thing I think you should fix. The flow of this is great, but there's one line that doesn't really fit with it all: "Then ...

Hi there! Let me start off by saying, wow! That was truly great and you've got me hooked. I want to read more! Ah! Anyway, it was a great way ...

Hi there! Wow...I absolutely love this! There's a nice bit of mystery here, making me wonder what exactly is going on. I like how the only thing we know is ...

Hi there! Alright, this chapter is a little disappointing after the mysterious prologue. Who knows, maybe you'll go back to that in the next chapter or something, but I was ...

Hi there! Sorry it took me a long time to respond to your request, but I've been pretty busy. Anyway, I'm here to review! First off I'd like to say ...

Hi there! Wow, this is a great story! I like your style. I think it's great that you kept the words and sentences simple; they really put a lot of ...

Hi there! Alright, it's been a while since I did this, so I'm going to try to get back into the swing of reviewing here. First off I want to ...

Hi there! I totally agree with emmylou. I believe that his poem could've used more background information. I'm not really sure what's going on, why this person is being killed, ...

Hi there! This is a really good poem. Sure, it may not be serious like the other poems I've read, but it's still a good one. You did a good ...

Hi there! I definitely think this is in the right category. It's about teleporting after all, yes? That's a certain aspect of science fiction. So, this is a good story. ...

Hi there! This is a really good poem. It flows well and has good emotion. I like it because, evern though it's Dramatic Poetry, it still seems to be telling ...

Hi there! I really like this poem. It's quite unique and is very interesting. It flows well and is quite catchy. You said you were going to read this aloud, ...