Noelle

Hi there! I'm here to review as requested! Those people that commented before me already covered the spelling/grammar mistakes so this review will basically focus on the content. I really ...

Hi there! I'm here to review as requested. Finally *phew* This is a very interesting poem. I'll be honest and say that I didn't know what a sestina was so ...

Hi there! Here to review as requested :) What you have here is a good start for a good story. You said this was part of another story, right? One ...

Hi there! I liked this chapter. I got some more information and really got to know Flo. I like the way you developed her character over time and you didn't ...

Hi there! Here's how you center it: type your poem here You need to use those codes around your poem. Make sense? First I'd like to say that I like ...

Hi there! So I just wrote this review for your poems here and boom, my wifi cuts out. I refreshed the page when it came back and everything was gone. ...

Hi there! I like how there is barely any dialogue in this piece. Dialogue sometimes takes away from good description. Whatever dialogue is absent in this is filled with great ...

Hi there! Wow, this is great! I really enjoyed reading it. My eyes were glued to the screen and I couldn't stop reading. Your descriptions are spot on and offer ...

Hi there! I'm here to review, as requested. :) I'll start out by saying this is short. Chapters don't have to be a certain length, but their usually longer, that's ...

Hi there! This is a great idea for a novel: a human trapped, working for demons. I would like to know a little more about the demons, however. I feel ...

Hi there! Comments/Suggestions: ~I like how you started with the death of Fred. It really threw me off; I wasn't expecting something like that already! And it also made an ...

Hi there! I liked this chapter because it gave me a lot of information. Because of that it wasn't action packed or anything, but it was interesting for me. I ...

Hi there! Okay, so I'm being completely honest here. I read this a couple of days ago but didn't have enough energy to write a review. So I'm back here ...

Hi there! So I noticed you're new to the site. Welcome! Alright, let's get to the reviewing! This is a strong piece for your first post. I can remember my ...

Hi there! Back to review another chapter in your novel. :) Your description in this chapter is great. I can imagine everything that is going on and everything you have ...