Noelle

Hi there! This is a good continuation and has good action. I like how Judi jumps out of nowhere and tackles everyone to the ground. That's when the good action ...

Hi there! I see you r face, I see it through the trees. Are you spying? start a new line Are you spying on me? I think the part where ...

Hi there! Thanks for chatting me to request a review. That's never happened to me before. It made me feel special :) I like this prologue. It's rather short, but ...

Hi there! Here to review as requested. Comments/Suggestions/Critiques: I never learned to write. Odd isn't it? Especially since I live in a library... *I absolutely love this first line. It ...

Hi there! This is a good plot. So after reading the first few sentences, I was wondering where you were going to sneak the romance in. Nice touch to have ...

Hi there! I actually started reviewing chapter 1 of this novel until I realized there was a prologue. So I stopped over here to take a look at this before ...

Hi there! *I like how you described the silence after Mika asked to hear the story. There's some good foreshadowing in it and makes me think it's a sensitive subject ...

Hi there! Alright, so I like the general idea of this poem. Honestly, this is how I feel most of the time so I can totally relate to this. The ...

Hi there! I'm here to review as requested. I like the relationship you are building here between Miles and Renee. It makes me want to read on a figure out ...

Hi there! I'm here to review as requested. I was really excited to read this. I thought I would get some explanation about what happened at the end of the ...

Hi there! I'm here to review as requested. First off, welcome to the site! :) It's always nice to see new writers joining our community. You'll love it here. I'd ...

Hi there! Here to review as requested. So apparently I have already reviewed this novel, but looking back at them, they were absolutely lame. It also looks like you changed ...

Hi there! Whoa, that last paragraph gave me chills. Literally. The words you chose and the way you crafted them together is amazing. You didn't simply tell us there was ...

Hi there! Sorry about my first post. I didn't mean to hit the submit button. Anyway, this is my real review: Comments/Suggestions/Critiques Afraid that I might love again A This ...

Afraid that I might love again A spark that has yet to dim But move on is what I do Cause I can't handle this simple truth-- Untouched words they’re ...