NivedaJames22

Hey! First of all, I really liked the distinctive character that you have lent to the letter. I like the blunt style of writing, which is quite contrasting to Amanda's ...

Hey! I guess I could go on and on about this poem and I would if I had the time, but I've got some work to do after this. So ...

Hey! First of all, I love how you narrated a little story through your poem. I also think your title was apt and perfect for the poem. It draws the ...

Hey! First of all, I really liked your title. It's intriguing without being too obvious. In short, it was perfect. I really like how you portray the girl pouring her ...

Hey! I have got no words to describe this poem! I love how it confronts the flaws in ourselves that we hate and hide, and cut ourselves into pieces, just ...

Hey! First of all, lemme just say, I loved this story. I read it right before I joined my physics class, so there's a coincidence! Anyway, I really like your ...

Hey! First of all, lemme just say I loved how you associate a broken family with food. The idea of a solitary coffee mug instead of the laughter of all ...

Hey! I loved the opening paragraph. I really liked how you start with a beautiful seashore and finish up with a line that somehow conveys that danger lurks in the ...

Hey! For starters, I love how deep and introspective this piece is. The entire concept is beautiful. I love how you explain the whole "kindergarten mindset". I love how you ...

Hey! For starters, lemme just say that I love this story! I find this chapter particularly intriguing as you show a different side of the so-called "Rebel" Prince. I really ...

Hey! Loved the Christopher Colombus ref...Does that have to do with Little Women??? I think there's an error in this line: "Oh thank god. I don't know them." Shouldn't it ...

Hey! I love the story so far...the characters, the plot...everything is perfect. "I'm in love, Nicoletta. People are foolish when they are in love," I remind her. She smiles, nodding ...

Hey Wow! I love how Cassandra's in this totally awkward position, and you handled it with such finesse. I think you meant "stared" here, not stare: "Come out so I ...

Hey! This is a great poem. I especially loved this part: remember the time i held your hand when you were afraid the night would never become day again? yes, ...

Hey! First of all, love the plot. I like how she goes in anticipating disaster, only to find that things aren't all that bad. I think you should rephrase this ...