Nightingale06

This is so relatable! I, too, believe online learning is very draining and monotonous. So I actually get you. The ending was actually funny. You used the language pretty well. ...

This chapter was the best till yet, according to me. Though I spotted some grammatical errors here too, if you could just read the story and look to it again. ...

I liked this chapter but I saw a grammatical error. You wrote "why does no one complains about her" It should be complain, not complains. But other than that I ...

That was a very touching poem. I was very relatable too. I just completed my 9th grade and, even though it was completely online, I can relate a bit. At ...

Wow! Wonderful poem! It is a complete package with many intricate details, and your words have the potential to arouse allot of hope in the readers. I really liked your ...

The ending I honestly found funny. Poor Marley! I actually felt disgusted by the teacher, which means your words have a lot of emotion. The new school is treating Marie ...

The story is coming along well! I like simple stories like this, in which you still can't predict what will come next. You have shown a slight character change in ...

The first poem is really touching. It tells us about all the things we just forget about. Such deep poems are difficult to write but you did a wonderful job ...

This poem is a very very relatable piece of work. All the details are so intricate and well-placed. Your poem is to-the-point. It says everything directly, and does not wander ...

That was truly touching and realistic. All muslims are stereotyped immensely, and you have shown that from an innocent child's eyes. People don't understand that if terrorists are Muslims, not ...

At first I did not understand what you really meant, but eventually I did. Man, the metaphor use is amazing! You have put so much emotion and emphasis on all ...

Beautifully done. I told you this would make a good novel. You just have to think up a name. This so nicely shows the relationship of a grandfather and a ...

I had read the prologue of this which you had posted before. I really adore your idea. Showing everyone's perspective is a very nice idea for a dramatic book like ...

That is a good prologue because it creates the right amount of suspense. It doesn't disclose much, and it doesn't disclose very less either. Missy's situation is a real messy ...

That was truly touching. And unfortunately, it was true too. I also don't like to stay behind and not go to a temple when I am having periods. I do ...