NightKaizer

HEELLO Burrow, A poem about a teenager who was killed. By what? Since the poem ends with the last hiding place- a bridge- I'm willing to accept that he was ...

HEELLO chhlovebooks, A short story about a lonely man with a curse. Or a gift? The words are like music themselves, merging together to create a beautiful scene. Your sense ...

HEELLO Codayy, A poem about the effects of winter and snow. I like how you played with the letters and words to make them look quite interesting and meaningful. This ...

HEELLO acm, A poem about a grandmother's deathday. This could be turned into a horror story. I like how you broke up sentences to make them look like stanzas in ...

HEELLO Remembrance, A poem about doing things your way. I like how you started your poem with quotes instead of a love line. I don't understand girls and their hair ...

HEELLO Loyal Day, A short story about the death of a younger brother. It's a good first paragraph. I hope there's more though. Also, you've added a bit of emotion ...

HEELLO Dime, A poem about falling in love with a girl who everyone thinks is evil. I say follow your heart. If you think differently from the majority, it means ...

HEELLO musicandme, A poem about how much a break-up hurts. I love the comparison you made with the x-boyfriend as a gardner and you and his new girlfriend as flowers. ...

HEELLO jordyn, A story about a family of tragedy. It reminds me of Romeo and Juliet. Very realistic too. I would like to make a suggestion: expand and turn this ...

HEELLO Queen of Narnia, A poem about a loved one you barely even knew. Touching and full of Love. Cancer is a rare, but terrible terrible thing. I'm so sorry. ...

HEELLO Keumgan, An emotional story about the death of a pet. I've never had a dog or cat before. But I have friends who do. They treat their pets like ...

HEELLO Burrow, A poem about an emotion everyone feels. Hate is a strong word. This poem is a message to all those people who think about throwing their life away. ...