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Re: At the playground.
Hello, I am here to do a very short review! :) You should definitely keep going! What is it going to be all about? Do you have any ideas of ...
Dec 20, 2013 -
Re: Take our bones, make us new
Pandabear7 here to do a review. It will be short probably lol. :) Anyways, I like how it is so short and yet the title tells you it all. The ...
Oct 7, 2013 -
Re: The Soul
Pandabear7 here to review for you. I like the story but lets get to the problems! Firstly, you don't have quotes around a lot of your talking, and it really ...
Oct 2, 2013 -
Re: Not Enough
Panda here to do you a review. :) I absolutely like the poem. You give great imagery of the places the bird sees. I like that you do rhyming and ...
Oct 2, 2013 -
Re: The Ghost
Hello, pandabear7 here to do a review. It will probably just be a short review seeing as I don't see any problems. You have perfect grammar, I don't see any ...
Sep 23, 2013 -
Re: Forget Me Not
Pandabear here, and oooo lalala I really like this poem. This structure is fantastico! :) Also no grammar mistakes? Yay you! :) Anyways, I like the whole thing equally because ...
Sep 22, 2013 -
Re: You
Lookie here, Its me, pandabear again! :) I cant help but read all of your stuff and now I must do reviews! Plus, I get my second star after this ...
Sep 5, 2013 -
Re: The Way..
Panda is here for you! :) Review time! I like your "I hate my ex" poem lol even though that's not what it is called. At first I thought you ...
Sep 5, 2013 -
Re: Forgotten
Hey there, pandabear7 here for a review. First of all, the poem had a great flow. :) I like your poems, honestly. lol. This is my second poem I have ...
Sep 5, 2013 -
Re: you were hidden by shadows
Hi! Pandabear here to do a review for you! :) I like the poem and I have noticed a lot of people, including you, have relatable poems. You are good ...
Sep 5, 2013 -
Re: stars
Hello, panda here to do you a review! :D This is a good poem, you have good imagery too! I like that I can actually relate to this, I don't ...
Sep 5, 2013 -
Re: Was It A Lie?
Hello, here to do a review :) I want my second star, lol. Anyways, wow this is so sad... you can definitely relate to it if you ever been through ...
Sep 5, 2013 -
Re: You're Somewhere Far Away
Hello, pandabear7 here to do a review. Firstly, I love the poem :) it is great. You must be a natural when it comes to poems lol because I know ...
Sep 3, 2013 -
Re: Lighthouse
Hello, pandabear7 here! First off, I love the imagery! :) it's just wonderful to me. When I read this, for some reason I see a lighthouse and a ocean with ...
Aug 31, 2013 -
Re: The Perfect need
Hello, I am pandabear7, here to review! :) First off, it is very beautiful and I bet your dad and his love, loved it. It is a great poem through ...
Aug 31, 2013
