Newmoon38

I wanna join! I wanna join!

Thanks for the review. :-) I appreciate that you took the time to review my poem. I hope you find your own 'light' one day!

This is an awesome poem, and it has even inspired me to write a story. I'm not sure if it will end up being a short or chaptered story. I ...

Alright I have now fixed all of the grammar mistakes you pointed out. Thanks again for pointing them out to me.

I'm not exactly sure if it is going to be in second person, considering how I write. I generally write as a piece of story comes to me. I like ...

Your review does help a lot. I have one more chapter finished, plus there the edition of another character in it. I hope you continue to enjoy the later chapters.

Thanks for the review! :-) I will make the changes you pointed out.

I'm happy to help when and where I can.

I'm glad I can help. :-)

Thank you for the review. You're probably right, I should have at the very least split it up a little. That would have made it easier to read and to ...

Thank you for the review. I wanted to leave exactly where he is a bit vague, so it would leave a bit of continuous mystery. I apologize that you had ...

No problem.

Honestly? I don't know how to. Sorry I can't be of help in that regard, but I'm glad I ended up helping you with your story.

Just leaving a comment this time. This is a very touching poem. It shows you really care about this person. I really liked your poem, and hope this person continues ...

This is a great poem. I like the rhyming quality to it (even though I have problems pulling it off). You've stated exactly what is wrong with today's idea of ...