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This is so powerful, and really let me get to know you throughout what you said in this piece. It shows the sadness, the good and the bad of being ...

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I really liked how you incorporated the love and the flowers and how eventually he had no reason to stay because he grew greedy and bored. It is a good ...

I really liked how you incorporated the love and the flowers and how eventually he had no reason to stay because he grew greedy and bored. It is a good ...

This made me miss my home more than ever. This was such a freaking beautiful representation of someone's love for their home and for someone else and it is unexplainable ...

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"Washing my feet in a poison I can't stand" was an awesome line. I like how you compare his goodbyes and hellos to waves. I do agree with the reviewer ...

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"Washing my feet in a poison I can't stand" was an awesome line. I like how you compare his goodbyes and hellos to waves. I do agree with the reviewer ...

I really love the story telling Of a persons live throughout their teenage years. It really shows how things are/were for most of us. It gives a very sad vibe, ...

I love it when writers explain their writing inspirations and how they feel about their own work and their audience. There was such beautiful imagery, and such passion in ths ...

I love it when writers explain their writing inspirations and how they feel about their own work and their audience. There was such beautiful imagery, and such passion in ths ...

This is so beautiful and it was an amazing tradition from a light feeling to a dark feeling. It gives a sense of power , yet weakness. "I have always ...

I loved this! The "I don't give a shit" vibe it gives off is strong and powerful. I feel like this poem shows independence and that nobody can tell you ...

Hey(: I love the feeling of hope that this poem gives off. It's very relatable and inspiring. I like how you told what could've been a long story in just ...

I'm so happy that I was able to draw a line of emotion from you that is hard to reach. All of my writing evokes very personal emotions, or so ...

The idea of the map was one of my favorite parts of the poem. I'm happy you agree! Thanks so much(: