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Hello there Lehmanf here with a short review. I hope it finds you well. My first impression is a very strong worded poem. The stanzas are really nice but I'm ...

Hello there Wayward Lehmanf here with a short review. I hope it finds you well. Overall this was a strong poem that expressed a lot of emotion. As you classified ...

Hi there, Lehmanf here with a short review. Personally, this poem is nice. A few spelling mistakes etc. Unto my lover whose eyes flow cold rivers and melt temporal cores, ...

Hey there, Lehmanf here with a short review. I hope it finds you well. Reading this poem I definitely have a quick ask. I think you should add punctuation. It ...

Hello FireEyes, I hope this you find well. Nightmare, creeping into your dream. I love the first two lines because there is so much meaning behind them. These potentially two ...

The bumblebee eats things all made from honey, devouring the fruits of her sugary tea. These first two lines really intrigue me but don't really hook me. You need to ...

This whole poem has a special message for me. When I was 9 our maid and her children who I had known since I was one or two were taken ...

Hey there Reaper! I hope you're well. I'm here with a quick review this morning. Ethan opens a window in his HUD to look at the time. As the clock ...

Hey there, MaybeAndrew, I hope all is well and you are having an excellent morning/afternoon/evening! Let's get this started. Arwen listened to the wind blow through the distant trees, trying ...

I like it! I love it, Miss Gangamash! The tone set. The characters. It all works out. Those stinging words and his reaction to them was excellent. I loved the ...

Hello Horisun, Thank you for the interesting poem. The brain has an incredible capacity. Especially having even named itself and since mine is directing me to say this. A set ...

Your rotting heart. No more love. No more I miss you. Strike it out. Show them you hate it. No h’s. No more I like you. Show them you hate ...

Hello Goldengoose, It is a very nice poem. I love the way you look at a dead person’s last moment. It obviously is hanging. Just the step between death and ...

Hello Liminality, It is a great chapter, though I am a little confused by the ending. I love the way it just seems natural. The way a character who is ...

Hello Otterpop, Can I just say that this chapter was... amazing. Blake’s wounds were depicted in an excellent style and the part of his injury was played well throughout the ...