Young Writers Society

Hello @vampricone6783! Here is my review: …That was before Mr.Lucas Ladouceur, William’s Dad, went on a mad murder rage and killed him and a few other people. Well that was ...

All right! Book two, here we go! Here's my review: A cold dawn crept over the still sands of the south coast of Megalonia, casting golden rays of light across ...

All right! I see that this is the last chapter. Here's my review: Then a wave of cold dread washed over him like ice water. What if the Death Grippers ...

All right, now to read this chapter! Here's my review: He could hear Emerald and Shiraku behind him, but could just make out their outlines. I feel like this needs ...

All right, now to learn about what happened after your cliffhanger! Here's my review: He could hear the Wisp Talons angry roars echoing through the forest a few meters behind ...

All right, now to continue on this wonderful novel of yours! Here's my review: Were there other dragon tribes? Did they fight for land as they did in Megalonia? Maybe ...

Hello! I'm here back for another review. And here it is: Yawning, he got to his feet, stretching from his head to the tip of his tail. This is being ...

Hello! I'm back to read this next chapter. I'm doing it a little bit different than I normally do. Normally I read the chapter and THEN write the review, but ...

Well, here's another chapter, with Zoltar and company back together. Anyway, here's my review: Okay so this was another great chapter, though it lacked a lot of the wonderful descriptions ...

Hello! Here I am, back for another review. Here's my review: Okay, so I liked Zoltar's thought patterns in this. Actually, that's basically what this chapter was about - Zoltar ...

Well, another interesting chapter! And I FINALLY get to see what was going on with the wisp talons. Anyway, here's my review: I like how you started the chapter with ...

Wooh! Cliffhangers! I love 'em. Anyway here's my review: This was an interesting chapter, as we get to see some more of Zoltar's thoughts as he's in quite the pickle. ...

Well, another great chapter! This one was quite short. I liked it though. The whole chapter was quite sit-on-the-edge-of-your-seat intense, and it was very effective to keep me interested. I ...

All righty! I haven't done any reviews in WAY too long, so here goes nothing. Okay so I started reading this trying to remember what was happening, but I remembered ...

This reminded me of warriors A LOT with the whole hunting thing. Here's my review: Though the plot doesn't develop much, you get to see another side of Zoltar, with ...