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Re: Sorry.
You don't know how much I agree with this. Sorry was a word that used to be the key to the foregrounds of forgiveness. Now? It's a cheap ticket to ...
Jul 13, 2011 -
Re: Closet Case
There's a lot missing. A lot of questions that someone can ask about the person in this poem. But, then again.. I feel like that's the point. It's not who, ...
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: Ambivalence
Everyone feels fear. In romance, it's no different. But with it, many new fears arise. Deception. Heartbreak. Loss of interest. Painful argumentation.. There's fear to be had and blended with ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Aivila
this is very very easy to relate to. the feeling of loosing something simple, but great. A true friend. I can feel the storm of feelings, emotion that blew over ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Love Don’t Promise
This is exactly. Word for word. A relationship just got kicked from last night. This speaks to me like a symbolic call from above, and I greatly appreciate your effort ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: We are.
I sense this is a truth that exists in all. Just as you stated in this very well structured piece, we all suffer from confusion. Paranoia. Discomfort. We as humans, ...
Jun 5, 2011 -
Re: Silly Me
I always tell myself that a girl could laugh into the eyes of a boy in love, and feel nothing. I always ask, "What do they feel when they're in ...
May 22, 2011 -
Re: I Might Just Surprise You.
Reading this greatly fascinated me. There are SO many different things one could assume about this piece! It's almost like a stencil for the common life situations teens and young ...
May 10, 2011 -
Re: Love You, Hate You, Miss You
This is a story that so many people live out just about every day. But you've told it in an effective and creative way! Expressing that jumble of emotions that ...
Apr 11, 2011 -
Re: deleted
This is a very well worded portrayal of how inspiration flows from a writer! It's almost as though you're defining that inexplicable rush of thoughts that burst from silence and ...
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: I can't make you love me.
That's a really sad story. I agree it belongs in the romance section, though. I think it's really foul when people cheat.. I'm a victim of it myself. I feel ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: Mike
This was a really good short story. I feel very tied in with the character, Carrie. I often find myself seeking the attention of my older sisters, though I can ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: My Aborted Child
I must say, I'm absolutely stunned. If I'm not crying now, I'm sure I will my second read through. This, was one powerful impact of a story. A truth, that ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: Thirteen
It didn't surprise me that this poem hooked me with it's title. Reading this was almost like watching simple but well detailed sequences of images. Flashing pictures that tell a ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: Mashed Potatoes
I truly enjoyed this piece. It's almost as though, In at least my perspective of course, that this is almost how some children feel when they're stuck at the table ...
Apr 6, 2011
