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by lele253isme

Published April 7, 2011

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Comments & reviews · 5
AuthorOfMyLife wrote a review Review · Apr 7, 2011

A really good poem! It's so true, and let's just say that it sucks to read it in the middle of a writers block, because it reminds me of how it is to write when you're not blocked.
- The poem's great, and I love how you just take a feeling, and describe it in this poetic way.
Good job! Keep writing stuff, because I love reading it :)

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dregymayfield
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dregymayfield wrote a review Review · Apr 7, 2011

This is a very well worded portrayal of how inspiration flows from a writer! It's almost as though you're defining that inexplicable rush of thoughts that burst from silence and crash onto the page with the impact of your creativity! Well written, and fantastic imagery! I enjoyed it!

I know I just copied what the person above me wrote, but everything that person said sums up what I feel about the poem as well.

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NathanielC
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NathanielC wrote a review Review · Apr 7, 2011

This is a very well worded portrayal of how inspiration flows from a writer! It's almost as though you're defining that inexplicable rush of thoughts that burst from silence and crash onto the page with the impact of your creativity! Well written, and fantastic imagery! I enjoyed it!

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Yanni1995
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Yanni1995 commented Comment · Apr 7, 2011

This is a really awesome poem. I love, love, love it!

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Soulkana
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Soulkana wrote a review Review · Apr 7, 2011

My hands are alive with a burning feeling
I can feel the words pouring from the very back of my mind
The nets of the cream colored, blue lined page open to catch them
The ideas connect with my heart and I pour them onto the page
Stirring them into words that have to be deciphered in order to understand how I feel
My brain is pounding as it turns numb from the feeling of writing
I'm hypnotized by the led of my pencil as I keep scribbling
My ears picking up no sound
Like a radio in a dark, dark storm
And I am in a storm
As my very soul makes itself at home on the page
I am in the storm of words


Was that suppose to led or "lead"? Otherwise I really like it and hope you keep writing. Good luck and Happy Writing!!!
Soulkana<3



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