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I'd like to read more about Cindy's interactions with her friend Hannah as well as with her boss. Given that her workplace is one of the first scenes in your ...

It's interesting that it doesn't sound like there were a lot of dressed up people. In my area, there's a Renaissance Festival that runs for a few months every year, ...

I really, really like the bit about Kali drinking a diet coke. In just a few lines, you managed to convey a lot about the scene and about Kali's character. ...

I like how you open this chapter. It's descriptive, and it also highlights some characteristics of your protagonist: Eralyn is not someone who'll give up, and she'll persevere to the ...

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ola~ Happy Review Day!!! ;) OH MY GOSH. How am I suppose to deal with that last bit? They lied to Falyn!! How come I didn't see that coming!!! That ...

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ere katiemyers! Niteowl here to review this for the Black Knights this fine Review Day! Overall, this is kind of cliche, but I like it. I think the transformation from ...

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Hello @artemis15sc ! It's @Sylar from the Earth Benders here to review your story! This is the fourth chapter of your story I've reviewed tonight! This novel is actually the ...

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Hello, fortis! I'm emeraldfox, representing Team EarthBenders this Review Day! I love this poem, although it does make me very sad. You perfectly captured how harsh the conditions are for ...

Hey all, just a quick reminder: when reviewing, please review! Writing just the same word over and over is spam. In this case, the author has said effortless reviews are ...

Hi Raven! This is actually pretty good for an 8-year-old, and the idea of a prequel about Harry Potter's youth is a pretty interesting one. I'm sure there's all sorts ...

The only prologue that has ever really stuck with me is the prologue to Jurassic Park. It lulls you into this false sense of calm by focusing on just a ...

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..Wow. Like Jack, this really touched me. Because I, too, have had conversations just like this.. ugh. Winter.. real conversations are this long, and longer. I have some saved. I'll ...

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SAMSONITE73: love you, bye Lisa6534: they are gorgeous SAMSONITE73: glad you like them Lisa6534: and i'm sorry that i'm being stupid, and i promise from now on SAMSONITE73: i love ...

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n the beginning of the New World, there were only two creatures. Two dragons. Kalashein, Goddess of the Moon. And Morako, God of the Sun. The pair were lonely in ...

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king!” Randall said. He flounced through the open doors and marched left, leaving Braxton no time to think as he caught up. Together, the second prince and fox snuck back ...