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To Rick's credit, he did put as the title "Warning: Read At Your Own Risk." Obviously he's fully aware of the profane language and knows that others may not take ...

Just finished it about 15 minutes ago, and it was brilliant (as everyone else has said). I'm really glad she chose to write an epilogue because I always wonder what ...

The imagery in the first and third stanza is really well done. However, the second stanza seems broken and out of place. Talking about the atoms of the flower and ...

Thanks to you, I can finally count to 5! But don't ever insult something you wrote. Other people may, and maybe they are right, and maybe they are wrong. But ...

Heh. Stick to critiquing guys, and avoid critiquing critiques :P Claudette ->> Turn that into an article for Squills! looby-lou ->> Welcome to YWS! It's good to see that you're ...

I was scrolling down the front page looking for something to read, and this caught my eye, so your opening definitely grabs the reader. The dialogue is done well, and ...

If the story contains foul language, as this one does, it needs to be rated R. I've already changed the content rating, but in the future you need to make ...

If society is still the same today as it is 1,000 years from now, it's very likely the President would hear it first from CNN ;) You need to run ...

Maybe I'm missing something, but I don't get it. What's up with the scientists and the rocket? And why was the color green banned? Maybe I'm just thinking too hard. ...

I got to get that formatting thing fixed so that indentations from Microsoft Word and other programs like it will carry over when you make a post. Used to have ...

faith! This is an interesting poem for a variety of reasons and it took me a few readings before I got it all, although I'm not quite sure whether it's ...

Stealing my title, eh? Humph! I gotta agree with Rei; this is a funny poem, but it's even funnier coming from you simply because of the complete disregard for grammar. ...

I wasn't intending to be mean, unless you're the type of people, who thinks "Hell", is a bad word. :/ Plus it's hard for me to be nice with the ...

This takes me back :D My college was on the river too (Saint Mary's River), but our dorms were very different. Some were co-ed, but I, fortunately enough (or maybe ...

This is a really good start; you have a nice, easy style here that is captivating. It's just interesting to read about someone's experience and then to think about how ...