Nargles

Wow! This is really good, I really enjoyed it. It is dark, macarbe, twisted and sad. Your use of rhyme really helps to juxtapose the darkness of the lyrics with ...

Yo!!!!!!! What a great piece of poetry/prose you have here. It is short, simple and to the points and I love works like that. Works that don't faff about with ...

Hey! Great poem, it is short, captivating and has a riddle, nursery rhyme like feel to it. To be honest I didn't have a problem with the rhyming, it flowed ...

Hey, Nargles here to give you a review. This was good, I really enjoyed it. Normally I don't review long poems such as this because I don't enjoy them as ...

Hey, This is a poem that can be cliche, boring and dull. When I read the title I sort of cringed a little. As I read it my opinion changed. ...

Hey! I really like this poem, it is well written and the rhyme fits well. The beat or rhythm is really good and helps to add to the overall poem. ...

Right, haven't reviewed a poem this short in ages. But! That shan't stop me! I like this poem, it is interesting, refreshing and rather beautiful. It has layers and layers ...

Holy balls! Dude! This is great! I love it, and I ain't just saying that. It is really good, you make it so intriguing and interesting and I really need ...

Hey! I love this poem, I honestly don't care that the rhyme is a bit iffy, it adds to the whole tone of it. You use language well and construct ...

Hey, Nargles to review for you! I lik this poem, it is sweet and nice and good. You have a really heartwarming story here and you manage to capture the ...

Hey! This is an interesting poem. Is it about abuse?? Because I feel that it is. But if it's not that's cool. Anyway, this is a good poem. It has ...

Hey! So, when I first started reading this I thought it would be a novel, as sci-fi novel that is basically about a person who time travelled. As I continued ...

Love, love, loved it! Honestly, this is great! I loved your pace and rhyme. It is very satirical and funny. While I didn't exactly understand it fully, it was still ...

Hey Dream, This poem is really good. It is very figurative and chocka block with some great imagery. There are a few puncuation and grammar mistakes, needing to add some ...

So, I read this poem thinking I wouldn't review it, but it was so good I had to give my 2 pence on it. I loved this poem, loved it ...