Mysticalxx

I love this poem! I love the essence of it, the message it conveys, I just............really like it! It's so realistic and I like the old fashioned style of writing ...

Oh, poetry is SO your cup of tea? How can you think it's not? I mean, I've read all of your peoms, and I loved all of them, honestly. Your ...

Wow, I really like this, although I don't understand some of it. I admire your ability to write sonnets as I find them difficult to write. Did your teacher like ...

Wow. This poem is........really good. Just........WOW. The usage of figurative ;anguage is wide and good. Just one thing: In the first stanza, you've put so many expressions and metaphors and ...

This poem is so...cute! How old is your brother? I mean, if he's small then it's a really good effort for him, and the poem is just so.............aww. Just one ...

I like these poems! I just don't understand the fifth haiku, but that's okay. Overall, you've done a good job and kept count of the syllables (which is hard, I ...

I don't usually like poems describing possessions (I think they're boring) but this one is different. For one, I like the wording. Some technical errors: The first line " The ...

I like it! Somehow, the rhyming sense and the writing style you used appealed to me at once. Especially the last few lines : (but look, that's YOUR pants on ...

I like it! I absolutely like it! Although, of course, you could've used better language and expressions, it's also fine the way it is. You've rhymed everything perfectly, and I ...

I love it! I love the original song from Mulan, so I naturally loved the way this was written! You've used nice vocabulary and good language.....mostly! Your punctuation needs just ...

I can TRULY relate to this whenever I take a math exam/test! My mind goes BLAAAAAAANK........... Anyways, the poem is really good! Nice usage of vocabulary, and good rhyming. And ...

For a three year old, it's really good! It rhymes AND makes sense, like who you get taller when you step on the elephant and can reach the ceiling. What ...

HAHA! It's hilarious! But, just curious, what is a podiatrist? My fav. line is " My friends have seizures; my carpets, they fray". It just seems really funny to me............:p ...

Alright, good poem but a few mistakes......... "It just makes grave comments sound delirious", in this line, 'delirous' isn't the right word. You could use some other word like 'hilarious' ...

............What? I don't get it. Do you usually write poems like this, or is this some type of poetry (don't think so). Whatever it is, I don't understand it and ...