Muzzammil

Thank you for the review and for mentioning my mistakes , i will cover them next time %u263A

Thank you very much . Yes ,of course , i will note my mistakes and will try to do more better next time .%u263A

Thanks , anytime

I have written my second poem . You can find it on my profile.

Thank you ! %u2764

And yeh ! You are write about grammer thingy but I think that the poetry should be free of any kind of grammer .

Anytime.

Yeh , i have noted my mistakes and I will be careful next time . Thanks for your opinion . Well talking of rhyming, I have a very good taste ...

Ok , Thanks %u263A

Your welcome %u263A

I understand %u263A. You can also visit my profile if you want , just one poem yet .

Nice . I like it . It is deep . Intresting . Good fella , hope you keep on going . ☺.

Interesting, very intresting 😘

Marvelous 😘, yoau have provided us something to think on . Nice , keep going ☺.