Muse

Well I liked it, nice and simple.. Yup..not much else i can really say about it except that its good! I feel rather drained tonight..

Reminds me of something you might find in a Bob Dylan song. Dont know why. This is really very good, i dont know what i can say which has already ...

How beautiful. Im a sucker for anything related to the sea, so im automatically in love with this piece. One of my favourites that i've read for a while actually, ...

Purdy. Me like it a lot...its cute :D

*is confused* sounds pretty though..and yeah..what nate said. :oops:

Oo-er, me buy. I want to play with ryan too! Hmph. Yesh, i agree with sureal..nice flow etc. You should expand it a little, i was enjoying it then it ...

Goodness sake. Amazing, as usual. *kicks* It reads as smooth as silk...yum. Love the title, by the way. :D

Uh...seemed a bit muddled. The message isn't very clear..I'm not quite sure what it's meant to mean. I like the short, snappy lines though. Fun to read XD.

Oh wow. Thank's everyone for commenting, means a lot to me :D. *is happy* Bluecows, It's really just about the comfort of home and being surrounded by loved ones.*shrugs*

Certainly well written..I like it. Don't really have much to comment on sorry, except that it's good. Ah well. Nice work..

I liked it. Certainly a change. I wasn't so sure about the ending though, but i don't know how it could be altered either. Pretty cool concept though, nice work. ...

sounds scary *runs away*

i agree completely with rei. Nice and original. It's what i like to see!

heh, yeah, s'funny. What's a sourdough roll? Doesn't sound very tasty.....

oh wow, sounds ace! Yes, Parump is a great name for a pig. Right off i go to read the first part. Woooo.