Published November 26, 2005
Burning cold,
Biting frost,
The sky is falling;
I am lost.
A simple poem, it came to me as I was trudging through the snow and cold today...
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Haha, thank you!
It sounds funny
It's a simple poem.
Nothing special, but I like it.
Thank ye!
Very good!
Managed to fit a lot into four lines
^^
Good
I understand ^^;
*tuts* it's a saying.....
ok then just short!!!!!!
No but seriously I do like it lol
*Tips hat* But whats so sweet about it? The cold was burning and the frost biting when I came up with the poem...
Short and sweet....
Yes, well the question mark is there bcause I wasn't sure 'Lost' was a good title. Hehehe...
(Thank yea all again, is there no other criticism?!)
Purdy. Me like it a lot...its cute
Why does the title have a question mark on the end? I don't think it needs one..
Nope, don't understand why it's there.
A memorable poem. It was good
GREAT. so simple, yet so effective. often a few lines will say SO much more than lots of false fancy words... i admire your ability to keep it so simple and not go overboard like i always do.
it also just sounds awesome. i like how you added the question mark to the title, it makes it much more interesting and intriguing.
just one little thing: this is not a critisism, just something that came to mind when i read it... the " sky is falling" part made me thik of that annoying kids book, chicken little, THE SKY IS FALLING!!
but this rocks. and i am being honest. if i though it could use some work, id let you know in a nice way.
Hehe paranoid? Sorry. Kidding. I am being honest. That other people like it also is just a sign that its a great poem!
I hope you aren't all saying this because everyone else is... I prefer the truth. Otherwise, if these praises are in fact the true feelings of each individual, I say thank you. And short is good, it stays in your mind.
I like it! Very short, but sweet and discriptive. Awesome flow.
It reminds me of the 5000000000000 times that my sister and I got lost.
Sister: Wait... where are we?
Me: Who cares? WHEEE!!! Goes sliding down the sand dunes.
Sister: Um... there's a little problem with that... there's like this crab or something at the bottom...
Me: AHHHH!
Yeah. So awesome.
Its really good, a simple poem. sticks in the mind. Love it!
Nice!!!
It was verry good and expressive, even though its only four lines!!! 
hm....nice nice...really good
Thank you! And this from 'The People's Poet' raises my morale!
Simple, and yet really good. Good rhyming and use of oxymoron in the first line. I like.