Published October 17, 2005
Chapped lips
Chalk dreams
Tiny capsuals
Are my relief
If you know what I mean
Pick a star
Swallow that pill
And fall to the floor
Hide your heart
Kill your soul
Destroy that world
Made by yourself
Hmmphf...not sure on the last line...
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It's about stupid behaviour that I experience because I'm an idiot. It's about my self destruction...if that doesn't sound too pretentious!
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I'm not too sure if this poem is about suicide? Is it?
It wasn't too bad a poem.
Uh...seemed a bit muddled. The message isn't very clear..I'm not quite sure what it's meant to mean. I like the short, snappy lines though. Fun to read XD.