My lips are chapped! (don't do titles!)

by thegirlwhofateloves
  • October 17, 2005
  • Poetry
  • Other

Chapped lips
Chalk dreams
Tiny capsuals
Are my relief
If you know what I mean
Pick a star
Swallow that pill
And fall to the floor
Hide your heart
Kill your soul
Destroy that world
Made by yourself



Hmmphf...not sure on the last line...

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thegirlwhofateloves
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thegirlwhofateloves commented · Mon Oct 31, 2005 1:14 pm

It's about stupid behaviour that I experience because I'm an idiot. It's about my self destruction...if that doesn't sound too pretentious!
x x x

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Nefer
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Nefer commented · Tue Oct 18, 2005 10:43 am

I'm not too sure if this poem is about suicide? Is it?

It wasn't too bad a poem. :D

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Muse
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Muse commented · Mon Oct 17, 2005 11:58 pm

Uh...seemed a bit muddled. The message isn't very clear..I'm not quite sure what it's meant to mean. I like the short, snappy lines though. Fun to read XD.



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