Morrigan

Hi there. While you have some pretty good images, there are some things you'll need to work on if you want to improve this poem. First, I like your first ...

Hi there. Obviously, this poem is very short. This review will be pretty brief, too. I read it, and it hit me. Like a coffee table in the shin. Wow. ...

Hi there. Admittedly, I haven't read much Byron (nor do I know very much about him), so please forgive me if I ramble on at some point during this review ...

Hi there. Wow. You manage to pack quite an image into a very small space. I love how the speaker comes to the realization at the end of the piece ...

Hi there. Overall, I like it. The way your words sit on the page are reminiscent of winter themselves. They come out cool and still, and really add a lot ...

Hi there. I can understand the sentiments in this poem. In fact, I felt that way very recently. It is a very odd, uncomfortable transition from childhood to adulthood. I ...

Hi there. Welcome to YWS. I hope to see you around here more, and more of your writing, too. =) I like that you take time to describe things. Some ...

Hi there. I like how you keep the same images throughout the whole poem. It's nice, simple, and focused. I think there are a few issues with it, however. So ...

Hi there. Hmm. Interesting. You have a nice meter, and the rhyme scheme didn't kill it. Not bad, there. In the first stanza, you write in first person, but in ...

Hi there. I enjoy your theme; that you're going to continue to improve. However, there are some issues that need to be addressed. This poem is entirely abstract. You're talking ...

Hi there. I like your style. It's not flowery, but still intriguing. I agree with Kyllorac; it feels quite disjointed. However, after several read-throughs, I think that I might have ...

Hi there. Well, this certainly made me chuckle a bit. I definitely know how it feels to try to stuff my words into something they really don't want to fit ...

Hi there, a'dale. Whoa. That first line. Nice. Love the images there. In fact, I love the images throughout the whole poem. I think there are some things that could ...

Hi there. I like your take on this very serious issue. You have solid word choice. There are, however, a few things I'd like to address in this poem. First ...

Hi there, Sherlockian! I like the images here, especially your castles one. Your words are quite well picked. I am, however, a little confused. "I promise I'll keep your memory ...