Morrigan

Hi there, Trees! Since you took the time to review my work, I decided to stop in and take a look at yours. I love the images. They're beautiful, meshing ...

Hello, doll. This is a pretty good start. I like that you use lots of descriptions. I can really see the girl. I think you can take the descriptions a ...

Hi there. I appreciate that you tackled subject matter like this. It is important for us to try to see the other side of things when we ourselves are not ...

Hello! I quite liked this. Your minimal description was a nice change from the over described dribble I'm used to reading. I like that you were able to convey what ...

Hello, Journalist. Your style is obviously maturing. I encourage you to keep experimenting with diverse forms of poetry to develop your own voice. This poem called to mind a line ...

Hello, FatCowsSis! I like that this ends in a question, leaving the reader to think about it. Haiku are generally about connecting nature with an idea. I don't take "nature" ...

Hello. This topic is very controversial, and a very talked about topic on this website recently. As I do not agree with the views in the poem, I will try ...

it depicted a scatterbrained image of trees, a cave, and other pictures I didn’t quite understand- a bear? Flowers? But at the end, there was an ‘X’. Well, doesn't that ...

Hello, dear. This is the best poem you've posted on this site. Your omission is exquisite. We don't need details. We just need that one image of a cracking fishbowl. ...

People argue that it's the right of the mother to decide what to do with her body during pregnancy. But they never consider the right of the child who just ...

Hi there! I really liked this. I haven't read the beginning, but I was able to see what was going on. You put your words together well. I didn't see ...

Hi, there. I appreciate the desire in this poem. I have been there. Let me tell you something before I review: you will find that friend. Be patient. It gets ...

Hi there! Ooh, a poem about preparing to write. I think it might be more effective if you didn't have all of these things you needed, but the story wanted ...

Hi! This is lovely! You use fantastic imagery all throughout the poem! That being said, there are a few things I'd like to address that could be improved. The first ...

Hi! Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. Don't start a poem with "it." I know you're trying to keep the tears a secret till the end, ...