Morrigan

Hi there! Since you reviewed my poem, I decided to rifle through your portfolio a bit, and I found this! I like the concept of this, and the way you ...

Hi there, 567ajt! I'm here to rescue your poem from the green room! So this is really interesting. I like the voice in this piece, and while you say it ...

Hi there, ongoeslife! The Hunger Games certainly makes you write about different things, now doesn't it? I did not know what the Boer Wars were, and I had to read ...

Hello, recreating! I really liked this piece! The concept is lovely, and I like the pondering aspect of it. My favorite part is when the narrator questions what the sun ...

Hi recreating! Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. I like the concept of your poem. It's charming, with the fear of both mediums, and the other ...

Indiee! (How was I not following you before? You're one of my favorite poets on YWS!) This gave me shivers. It was beautiful about being humble and it was bittersweet, ...

Hi, Crunchman99! I'm really excited to review your poem! I hope that my review can start to live up to the normal quality of your reviews ;) All right, so ...

Hi there! Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. First of all, I think you should change the title, as the My Chemical Romance song that the ...

Hi there! Before I go into a detailed review of each poem, I'm going to suggest that you post these individually, as you'll get more detailed reviews on them that ...

Hi, Jade. I'm here to give your poem a very long and helpful review. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. I would have to disagree with ...

Wow! I loved this! I'm not usually a fan of such structured poetry, but you really did this nicely, with a very unique voice. I loved that the oarsman spoke ...

Hi, queerelves! Firstly, I'd like to suggest that you single space your poem. On YWS, you have to hold shift when you enter down to a new line. If you ...

Hi there! Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. That line you're so up and arms about? Change it. Not because it's grammatically incorrect (though that did ...

Hi there! Here to give you a review for the May Poetry Exchange! Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. I like some of the rhythms you ...

DANG GURL THIS IS GOOD Hi! I'm here to review for the poetry exchange! Sometimes, the shortness of your lines kind of made the poem feel a bit choppy. Some ...