Morrigan

Hi, Iggy! So I loved the imagery. It was fab. But the thing is, the beginning hints at something more, but we never get it. As the poet, you might ...

Hi, rhia! I love reading your poetry. It's so image rich; it takes me away and lets me experience the narrator's emotions and I love seeing what new images you ...

Hey there, therealme! Wow! I really enjoyed this! Thanks for sharing this on YWS! I love how focused it is on the other person and their need for comfort, but ...

Hi, fort! While I can see from where you're coming in this poem, I feel like it needs a bit more development. Repetition is a poetic device, yes, but it's ...

Hi, fort! So I really liked the title and the acrostic part of this. When I saw acrostic in the title, though, I was like, "No!" because acrostics, in my ...

Whoa. That was an intense experience. Although I looked at it before I read it and deemed it too long, I realize now that it was necessary. That was lovely. ...

Hello! Oh my goodness. Mole. Avocado. Guacamole. I laughed quite hard. I really liked this poem! The images are refreshing. They made me think about things that I don't, normally, ...

Hi there! Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. First of all, I have no idea what the point of this poem was. The first part is ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS! The truth is, if you want this to be a sonnet, there's going to be quite a bit of rewriting going on. Iambic pentameter is ...

Hello, Madam Lisa! Obviously this poem is about finding something good after coming from a dark place. Right now, though, it feels like more of a sketch than a painting, ...

Hi there! So I appreciate the message of this poem, but I think it needs a little work on execution. The main issues I had in this piece were these: ...

Hi there! So I quite liked this. The form was very interesting-- the way you used the second line of the preceding stanza to begin the next stanza. I don't ...

Wow, Dreamy, this was fab! I love the simple imagery that comes together to create this nice little idea-- this "fragment," you call it. Even if it is a fragment ...

Hi there. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. Honestly, this poem can come off as quite offensive. There are two things that made me uncomfortable while ...

Hi there, oliviacray! Welcome to YWS! I actually did not find this poem funny at all, but rather a serious poem about the sadness of how people cannot accept their ...