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Re: Artifice of the Beast
Hi there! Gosh dang, I really liked this! It's simple, yes, but the beauty of it lies in its simplicity. Nice job! That being said, there are a few things ...
Jul 23, 2014 -
Re: Temptations of the good man
Hi Architect. I'm glad you're working through how you feel. Sometimes it's not about the poetry, but about the catharsis. Since you said that it's for you and by you, ...
Jul 22, 2014 -
Re: Thrills.
Hey, Strange. I have no idea what to say about this. It's not terrible, but the subject matter is so weird that all I can do is sit here and ...
Jul 21, 2014 -
Re: Silent.
Hello there, jazzydracula. Great name, by the way. Obviously this is a Doctor Who fanfic, talking about the Silence. Let's pretend for a second that I have no idea what ...
Jul 21, 2014 -
Re: Ocean Water in my Veins and Sand Between my Toes
Hello, rhia. I'm quite impressed with this poem. It's beautiful, and I really like the slightly experimental format you're using. Good job dealing with YWS formatting, too! That being said, ...
Jul 21, 2014 -
Re: Lose Control
Hey there, wtp. So this was interesting. I don't really know if I get it, but my research on the phrases you're using tell me that you're talking about something ...
Jul 21, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 10: The Impression
Hi there! Magpie here to save you from the Green Room! I really liked this! As I'm new to the series, there might be a few things I didn't understand, ...
Jul 7, 2014 -
Re: a rattlesnake by the watershed
*screeches in delight* WOW Okay so this is fabulous. I love all the imagery you use. Fab. Also, I like the fact that you take something as dangerous as a ...
Jul 6, 2014 -
Re: Bonkers
Hi, Birkhoff! This poem made me make a kawaii face. It's really cute, and really short. I like it. I think that the repetition of "Oh teddy bear" at the ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Where It's Headed
Hi there, wtp! While I agree with some of the sentiments expressed in the poem, I think it could use a little work. This is less of a poem than ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Father To Daughter (Please Forgive Me)
Hey there, friend. So I know that this is part of a series, and I know that this character probably has more character development in other places in this series, ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Maya Angelou 1928-2014-
Hi francesca! Boy, am I a fan of Maya Angelou, so I clicked on this poem hoping for great things. However, poetry is supposed to say something new, or something ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: the ocean waves are never straight
Hi fort! So I don't know why, but this poem really struck a deep emotional chord within me, and before I knew it, my mascara was running. Hang on, I ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: I'm an Ignoramous
Hi there, defyingravity! I don't know if you intended this poem to be hilarious, but it was. It perfectly conveys the awkwardness that follows an unrequited crush on a friend. ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: The Block
Hi, hesmiledatme! I like the emotions you've put into this poem. I could feel that you were having some strong emotions when you wrote this! However, I have a few ...
Jun 29, 2014
