Morrigan

Hello, AMDDOG. This is nice. Poems about friendship are always warm and inviting. That being said, there are a few things that should change. 1) you have a lot of ...

Hello, WindSailor. Obviously this is written to be a contemporary Christian song about redemption and Jesus and stuff. The language is nice, the feeling is nice. But what makes it ...

Hello, Tigerlilly37! I'm here to rescue your work from the green room! I like the message of your piece. I'm glad that the end is positive-- so many poems that ...

Hello. This is terrifying. It makes me sick. I would never wish what you're wishing on anyone else. It's not funny at all, and it really makes my skin crawl ...

Heya Strange. I love this. I told you in chat. But I'm going to say it again. To be honest, I do this. I stock my bookshelf with classics, but ...

Hello, DriftingPulp! I like what you've got here. There isn't much, but it's a snapshot of a life about to change. I like that it's not the usual coming out ...

Oh. My. God. I would have seen this earlier, but I was gone on a trip when you posted this. This is the best poem I've read in a long ...

Hello. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. I understand the sentiments in this poem. I have felt them myself when I was younger. However, I feel ...

Oh my god. I love this. You perfectly illustrate the depression that can lead to other issues, like eating disorders, in this case. And you do it with ramen. I ...

Hi there! Here with team Smaug to review! I like the idea of this poem, the reminiscence and characterization of a place. I appreciate how you start addressing the place ...

Hello there, WaltzingDreams! Today, I'm going to talk to you about form. Playscripts are about performance more than the writer, to be honest. The actor needs to be free to ...

Hi, Autumns. Mmm, this is lovely. It transports me to a different, exotic place that is home at the same time. I can hear the chatting of good friends, all ...

Hi, anshira! Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. I found this poem a little irritating. The sing-songy rhyme scheme was probably a good chunk of it. ...

Hey there, Craz. All right, man, I'm going to be honest. I'm really confused. Reading the poem on its own-- This could be about anything, really. The way a dramatic ...

Hi there, monsters! This is an interesting poem you've written. I like that you've found a new way to talk about an overused idea (the feeling of rotting from the ...