Warning: This work has been rated 18+ for language and violence.
Just a redraft of a song I made nearly 4 years ago. It's about a girl I REALLY REALY HATED at school, so watch out for the language. I was 15, now I'm 19, and else foul-mouthed.
Interesting fact: If you want to get the best out of reading this song, it's a parody of a song called "I Hate Boys" by Christina Aguilera, just look it up and read this song as you listen to it, it has the same rhythm and everything, and you'd probably enjoy it more. I have sung this to a few people in real life, just saying.
No-no-no no she ain't pretty
She's a hag
Well maybe she's sleazy
In fact a slag
I know everytime she walks to the class
She thinks she's all that with her stupid hair and her small arse
Latife!
She's only good to kill
Cos she's a munter
Latife!
If I was rich then I'd hire a hunter
Latife!
We should fuck her up and beat the fuck out of
her-her-her-her-her
Lati-tife
(I hate her)
I hate Latife
I wish she died
If I had killed her
No one would have cried
I'd kill Latife
With cyanide
E-ye-e-ye-e-ye-e-ye-e.
I. Hate. Her.
If you hate Latife, shake it. Now shake it.
If you hate Latife, shake it.
Now shake it.
I would feel so much better
Feel so lit
If some old pervert
Cut off her tit
I wish someone would stab her muff
Cause she thinks that she is buff
Just rip. Off. He-er. Cli-it.
She thinks they like her
But they really wanna spike her
Then again, Latife's a whore (Uhh!)
Let's say some more
I hate Latife
She is a slut
Someone should put their knife into her butt.
I hate Latife
I hate her guts
E-ye-e-ye-e-ye-e-ye-e
I. Hate. Her.
If you hate Latife, rape her (or not)
If you hate Latife take her
LET'S GO.
SHE SUCKS
THINKS SHE'S SICK
FUCKING STUPID
LITTLE PRICK
KICK HER TITS
BREAK HER NECK
I HATE LATIFE
I hate Latife
The prostitute
Someone replace her
With a substitute
I hate Latife
That fucking brute
E-ye-e-ye-e-ye-e-ye-e e
I. Hate. Her.
Oh oh
I hate Latife
Like water hates oil
Just thinking of her
Makes my blood boil
I hate Latife
I'd homicide
E-ye-e-ye-e-ye-e-ye-e
She'll get fried!
Lol what do you think of the revised edition?
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Cr*ppiest song I have ever heard! Only a psychotic person can say lines like,
"Someone should put their knife into her butt."
"If you hate Latife, rape her (or not)"
Complete garbage. You need to consult a psychiatrist
Hello.
This is terrifying. It makes me sick. I would never wish what you're wishing on anyone else. It's not funny at all, and it really makes my skin crawl that anyone would say these things about someone else, no matter the level of dislike.
These are the most problematic lines. You're literally wishing rape on this poor girl. Rape is not something to joke about, and especially not wish on someone. Don't joke about it. Do you think that a rape survivor would enjoy reading this poem? Do you think that this is making anyone hate Latife, too?
This is also terrible. You're talking about genital mutilation, which is terribly painful and can cause lifelong infections. I don't care how much you hate someone. You need to look at the social contexts of what you're saying before you say it. On genital mutilation:
A.M. Rosenthal, New York Times.
I will not touch as much on the murderous streak in this poem, as murder is often used as a device in poetry and lyrics for catharsis. However, I will say that combined with the other threats in this poem, this poem is dangerous. I hope no one catches you, or you will be in a lot of trouble.
The other thing I'd like to point out is the obvious misogyny in the poem. You call this poor girl a plethora of slurs, and really, what she does with her body is her choice, and she shouldn't be judged for it. Especially by someone who threatens her with rape.
The overall issue with this song is that it makes me hate the narrator, not Latife. Revise it so that the audience is with you, not against you.
I don't even know I what I just read... but it totally made me laugh. I don't even know if this counts as a review, but oh well. You must have really, really, REALLLY hated her... Wow. This is so jacked up but it's so entirely funny at the same time... I don't even-I don't even know what I just read... but I don't think I can forget it...
Hey, there this is brielle. I think your crazy in a good way. If you felt like this you needed alot of help. or you were bullied bye her which made you feel like this. There was this girl in my A.P.Bio . class that didnt like this girl and one day she really hurted her feelings and stuff i feel like you should just like the angery go. And if this was a song i wouldve wrote this over again. It Good i just dont know about the cutting her titit's off lmao. yeah and feel free to talk to me anytime. I'm here but KEEP WRITING !