MoonlightForest

Wow Queenie, this is a dark piece! From my understanding of it, a teenage/adolescent girl, unable to bear the parental expectations and pressures of her day-to-day life, jumps to her ...

Hi there! MoonlightForest here to review your piece! First off, I think your hook is pretty well-written. It's interesting how your narrator very nonchalantly shrugs off 10 years as if ...

Tgham99 - you are the master of suspense. I hope you know that! Even though I got some Annabelle vibes in reading this plot, I still enjoyed your fresh take ...

Hey there, Moonlight Forest here for a brief review! First of all, thanks for making me realize just how much I've missed good poetry! This poem has a great cadence ...

Hi there! It's Moonlight Forest here to review your piece :) So, right off the bat I can see that you have real skill with formulating plots. There is clearly ...

Hello there! As the other reviewer mentioned, I think the introduction to your piece is very solid. The action of Quinn and Christian burning their trio member's last remaining possession ...

Let me just say, first and foremost, that your poem gave me goosebumps! I really adore your message and the way you deliver it. There's something about the excess use ...

Hi, Moonlight Forest here to review your piece! First off, there are so many good things about your writing. I appreciated your characterization of Dilmaz: he actually gave me vibes ...

Wow, this is an excellent piece of flash fiction! I appreciate the fact that you address the entire concept of touch without a dull moment. Your prose is very clear ...

Wow! This piece gave me some strong Black Mirror vibes, but I loved it. You effectively made use of the plot twist, because initially I was rooting for Mrs. Swanson. ...

Hi there, MoonlightForest here for a review! First off, I want to start off by complimenting the flow of your writing. You have a great rhythm to your prose, and ...

Hiya, it's MoonlightForest here to review your piece! First off, your opening sentence did a lot to intrigue me with the poetic way it was written. I really appreciate the ...

Hi there, MoonlightForest here for a review! I think you've established a really clean rhythm with this poem, and that's one of the strongest points of the whole piece. You ...

Hello, MoonlightForest here for a review! I really like your idea so far because it adds a new twist on a pondered possibility. What would it be like to wander ...

Hey there, As I was scrolling through the various short stories on this site, your title was among the first to catch my eye. Something I noticed as I was ...