MoonTitanZan

Wonderful! I could feel the emotion seeping from the poem into my skull. I wont give a very detailed review (forgive me! :P) but I really did like this. If ...

Amazing! Five out of five. I loved the idea. You made it so clear with the words you used. Unfortunately I don't have time to give a lengthy review, hopfully ...

I can somwhat relate with this poem, for I used to love the rain when I was younger, and I was miserable all the time, but felt somhow happy in ...

Wow, good job. I don't normally like this, but this is an exception. Normally it would have to be built up to greatly for me to truely feel this kind ...

Very brief, very fulfilling though. I liked the idea, liked the imagry. Though it could use a small bit more imagry. I loved the idea after the last line. At ...

*edit* *You changed your poem while I was writing this review, ha! Okay I'll add the other stanza to the quote, but I won't write anything on it, though I ...

Good job, very strong imagery. Maybe even a tiny bit too much, since it get a bit muddled in a few of the stanzas. To start, I really like the ...

Absolutely incredible. I especially like what you did with the violin strings ...hair the snapped strings of a violin, coiling forever backward,... It's as if her very hair is made ...

Great job! When I first looked at it, I couldn't get past the first lie because your profile picture is SO amazing, but distracting... I was VERY tired at the ...

I liked this! Great, refreshing, simple. My favourite part is at the very begining Toothpaste & Toothbrush: Oh how I love you

Odd title to go with an odd story. I love stories that can underexadurate something, and you did that very well. Great idea, great narration. I won't bother going into ...

Great job, I enjoyed reading that. Only spelling error I saw was "wit" in the sixth to last paragraph should be "with" I believe. One other thing is at the ...

This is very good, thank you for sharing it! I especially like the rhyming since it doesn't feel very forced as most poems do when rhyming is introduced. For example: ...

Thank you for sharing this, it's very good. It's very well put together and every stanza works like clock work to one another. I only have a tiny bit of ...

I must say, that is how poetry should be writen. I've never read anything with so much character and emotion in it. I can't wait to see more work from ...