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Re: My Hands Dress My Feet
This is such a humorous yet thought-provoking piece. The line that got me laughing was: Don't hang paintings! The want to live too!!! The amount of exclamation marks you inputted ...
Dec 27, 2013 -
Re: Death Won't Set You Free
Hello! This was an interesting piece to read. I'd have to agree with the idea that people who believe that death with set them free won't actually be free and ...
Dec 27, 2013 -
Re: Reading Books
Hello! I actually thought that this poem was funny. For a once-over read, I thought the flow was okay. Content: I agree with the second stanza about reading fan fiction. ...
Dec 15, 2013 -
Re: What can I do?
Perhaps you can talk this out with someone else like a therapist, but make it's one you really trust and feel comfortable with. Also, if you try talking to you're ...
Nov 29, 2013 -
Re: I write because...
Bravo! This was so beautiful and heartfelt. It really touched me because these are the feelings I feel about writing. Even on my darkest days I write. I can't stop, ...
Nov 29, 2013 -
Re: Halcyon
Wow, this was really interesting! I really like the flip from past to present. couple of clarifying questions: what grade were they in in the present or how old were ...
Nov 28, 2013 -
Re: Panic Attack
Wow, that was intense. So... intense. Very descriptive. It kind of made me feel like I was having a panic attack, and I'm pretty sure that was your point. Really ...
Nov 28, 2013 -
Re: The Curious Mind of a Teenager.
Holy freaking sdfnsdlfhsdiofshnf that was amazing! You've captured the life of a teenager very well, even though you say you're just beginning yourself. I'm sixteen and sweetheart, it ain't no ...
Nov 28, 2013 -
Re: The Meaning of Life
This was such a heartwarming story, Liaya . I like how you incorporated a life lesson at the end. It's a sweet story and it makes people remember that the ...
Nov 28, 2013 -
Re: Allow Me a Sip, Would You?
Hello! MooCowPoop here for a quick review. That was an interesting poem. It was also kind of funny. I liked the content. I liked the old man. I had to ...
Nov 26, 2013 -
Re: Shoots and Ladders
Yet again you amaze me with your writing talent @KnightTeen! This piece was so creepy yet interesting. It had my attention at every word. I could really imagine Annie, and ...
Nov 26, 2013 -
Re: Government.
MooCowPoop here for a quick review! I felt like it was nice a nice piece and your ideas are very clever. However, I feel like it droned on at certain ...
Nov 25, 2013 -
Re: Would you like to know how you died?
I immediately liked this story because it was science fiction. The idea was so great! I loved it! And the the dialogue is great! I especially liked the end. I ...
Nov 25, 2013 -
Re: Brown Eyes
Hello there! I like this poem.its narrates very well. I like that you are telling the story about someone else in this poem from the view of another person. It ...
Nov 25, 2013 -
Re: Empty 9
Wow, that... was very interesting. Is this your personal story? Were you just writing down all of your thoughts? If so, you think about a lot of things. It felt ...
Nov 25, 2013
