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Neither is disapparate.
It made perfect sense to me. Well written.
Wow, that... was very interesting. Is this your personal story? Were you just writing down all of your thoughts? If so, you think about a lot of things. It felt almost like I was in your mind or leading a journal entry, which is the same thing. Yes I am doing a review, and yes it didn't make any sense to me, like you predicted, but I don't think you're insane. I like how its written though. I guess it was just one of those days where you type whatever comes to mind, eh? I can dig it. One thing though, don't beat yourself up too much. It seems like youre freaking out about a whole bunch of stuff. Just take a day off and ell everyone to piss off for a moment so that you can relax.
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