Monsters
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'ello dark, believe it or not I have seen improvement! Where do you want to go, with your big luggage bag, Walking aimlessly-confused; is there no place for you, even ...
Sep 16, 2013
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burning and churning and touch purity love fades into obscurity time turns into more time and i’ve been blind You know, this is only going to waste your time. This ...
Sep 16, 2013
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I am anxious. I am in doubt. Of myself. Of single things and everything. And I have been comforting myself. I have wrapped myself in blankets, I have drowned myself ...
Sep 14, 2013
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*This review would have made you gouge your eyes so I have protected you by removing it.*
Sep 13, 2013
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The rain knocks on my window, You know how long it took me to picture rain knocking on a window? Like 2 seconds when I realized rain cannot knock; it ...
Sep 12, 2013
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I don't believe in techniques too much so I won't pester you if you don't follow all the rules; in the end its just a poem. Break my legs, like ...
Sep 12, 2013
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'ello. ewh formatting. All it tells me is you can't sell your poem on the merit of your words but you need bold text centered in the middle of the ...
Sep 12, 2013
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Wow, you managed to tell us everything about this land you experienced but what it was like or what it even looked like. I can even get a rough ambiguity ...
Sep 11, 2013
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The words that came out of your mouth, is filled with venomous words, sharp, pierced into my veins, to make my whole body stiffen. So the words that are coming ...
Sep 11, 2013
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Where were you that night, when those towers fell, when those people died, and the world went to hell? Lets take a look at the important things that progressed your ...
Sep 11, 2013