Monsters

For me, it's a matter of personal style. Poems that prioritize ideology over substance, imagery, and so on, tend to resonate only with those who share the same views. Perhaps ...

You really have a remarkable talent for wordplay, and I must say, it's truly impressive. But what slightly throws me off is the lack of cohesiveness. It feels like the ...

Let's be honest for a minute; we're all frauds comparatively. We review your work in the same semblance of a customer on yelp talking about their fries being to cold ...

This is too much to fast and not so focused, the reader wants details that can you can describe in a way that makes them excitable or see the imagery ...

Take this with a grain of salt, it's more of my rant against almost all the poems. I wish I could show you the tarnished parts of me, the moldy ...

This will sound harsh. Sorry in advance. Frankly, this is a rambling mess that doesn't come to a conclusion at all. If I'm stuck trying to analyze what the writing's ...

she is a girl who knows what it means to smile. This whole poem is like this sentence. It names a random disjointed piece of your intuition and gives the ...

I love this, but I feel it gets off to a bad start. I'd be remissed if I didn't say that the internal rhyme here isn't a little bit beautiful; ...

Much better then "5 PM" but it's forced. You're too busy trying to resemble a perfect amount of syllables and keeping to your rhyme scheme that you forgot too express ...

I wasn't going to review this until I read your comment about wanting a critique and decided that you deserve one for this, almost great poem. For me, this is ...

Hello, thanks for requesting this review on my thread but quite honestly, I could literally fall asleep to this. I'm not attacking you as a writer here, just the poem. ...

Hello, I think this needs alot of work so rather than picking it apart I am going to give you a general impression of it. Please excuse the lack of ...

There was so much potential in this article, but I feel disappointed. It is a decent article but really not what I had in mind - I've taken most of ...

hello Caterpickle, thanks for the comment on my page, I figured you wouldn't mind a review from me. For your first poem it is not awful, you stuck to a ...

Hello Ladyspark, You have taken every usual step of an inexperienced writer here. 1. You write about the imagery of the mountain in a way that blends into the voice ...