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Funny, I would say it is that after one rereads it as to understand the poem's meaning. I like the mock of the justice system in the following line; "charged ...

Wow. That was awesome. Can I ask what your inspiration was? It sounds almost religious but it isn't quite. I like the description of the Darkness and the Light. I ...

I really liked it. The religious aspect was really good. I haven't read the other poems so I wasn't sure what was going on. Good job. Your style is different ...

You have amazing poetic ability. Keep writing stuff like this, it is awesome. I wasn't a huge fan of the part when you said "The answer has always been and ...

Wow. I'm ... shocked. That ending was awesome and unexpected. I loved the black, red, blue and white. Your descriptions were short but thought inspiring. I wasn't a huge fan ...

First of all, the writing was awesome! It was seriously one of the best things I've read. I mean, "animal fat", "the lipids of some poor animal" has such a ...

Oh my gosh so good! Thank you for including Sam's age in this chapter. I'm so glad Mrs. Nesbit is back. Yay! Okay, good things first. As I was reading ...

I really like Terence. He is funny and well developed even when we first met him. I loved how you said that Yorkdale Buttersworth made him crave pudding. I loved ...

You're poem is good. I liked how short it was. You didn't need so many words to show your point and I really liked the style. Short and not really ...

That was really good. It wasn't just skipping through a meadow which I know people think about with nature. It was about night too and the natural cycle. Also I ...

Okay not going to lie. That was kinda disturbing. I really like the Ms. Nesbit character. I would like to know more about her and I hope she is a ...

Hey, what's up? Welcome to YWS! Good job on your poem; I really liked it. It reminded me of summer and happiness yet at the same time, sadness. It makes ...

I really like the first and second sentence. They are kind of funny. It really worked and drew my attention. I could kind of relate to the emotion and frustration ...

That is an awesome story. Your descriptions were really impressive and I loved the overall feeling in the story. I could see the scene play out as i read it. ...

That was really good. You did a great job engaging your readers and i can't wait to read more. The ending was awesome and you created an awesome cliff-hanger. I ...