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I like the imagery in this! And the old english talk. I also like the fact that you have given depth to her love for her prince charming. This reminds ...

Wow. I love the imagery in this! I really liked the way you wrote this. I also like the spirits and ghosts, I think they add a certain mystery to ...

Aww. It's really nice! I especially like the ending, it's a good way to end it, and it keeps in the mood and theme of the piece. The only thing ...

It's really nice, and straight to the presents the realistic view, that everything isn't a fairy tale ending. Not every ones life is full of sugar, spice and everything nice. ...

Aww, this is so nice! I love how you have travelled through your life, and put not only the bad, that your mum had to help you with, but the ...

This has a nice theme to it. It changes tenses and scences a bit, which confuses the reader, and there are afew gramatical errors. From what I can gather, it ...

This is pretty! Quite afew grammar errors that you should fix up though. I like the way you've described your feelings, but I think you could even do more of ...

This is really pretty! Good job! I felt as though you didn't need to repeat a lot of the words. A tiny bit of grammar that needs fixing. :D hehe. ...

Hey KAt! Loved the prologue! :D I opened it. It said 'hi' and was signed by Eric. That was it. That was how a best friendship started, with one single ...

Hi, I'm here, sorry it's taken so long! I don't have all that much to say, apart from the fact that I really enjoyed reading it! I love the description ...

Hey Fruitbaskets! (I'm here, finally. =] And only doing a short review, :( because I didn't find much wrong.) Just letting you know, I played SSBB, once upon a time, ...

Hello! Here's my review! :D The sun’s rays glistening on my window woke me up from sleep. I open my eyes, still blurry, and see that the time is about ...

Hello. I thought this was a good, well told piece, and I didn't see an grammatical errors. The only thing I found, was that when Rebbecca talks to her children ...

Hello. First off I would like to say that I love it! Afew things I found. 1) When she meets the vampire family, she says she feels more at home ...

I couldn't stop laughing!! My sister was/is sitting next to me, and every time I started laughing she gave me a weird look, so I lost it, and was on ...