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Hey, Chan! Nice to meet you. Okay, so this made me smile...and I'm having a pretty rough day so that's like a whole fit of laughter right now. Lol. YWS ...

Amy! Poetry...oh my. You've been out for awhile in that section, eh? doesn't show, Aqua-a-nator. Nope. This is a really good poem in my opinion, I actually liked it alot, ...

Hey there, Leader! Fellow Christian here. Love your poem, honestly I do. It's very unique and original. Reading this was very nice, most all of it flowed like a gushing ...

You've recieved a lot of tips, but I'm still gonna add what I think. This is mostly just rambling, and a lot of it at that. Barely any rhyme or ...

Hey, M! Nice to meet you, and welcome to YWS. I hope you're liking it here so far. Anyways. On to your poem... This is very nice. Quite short, but ...

Okay, so hey there Timmy. Told ya I'd review for you! Anyhoo (boy, what an awesome word, eh?), I like the poem you have here. It's actually quite nicely written ...

Hey there. Nice poem! It's pretty good. I do, however, have some critiques...including your... Rhyming. Not good. Seems forced in more than a few places. I could easily think of ...

Hey. So, nice to meet you meslo. Anyways. You spelled stem wrong...you said "steam", which is very much incorrect. Pardon me, I'm a spell check geek. This is quite good ...

Hey, Bubbles...Lava...I don't know you're official nickame, so forgive me if I didn't say the right one. Okay, so this is pretty good. I didn't think it stood out much, ...

Hey, Pen! Nice poem! Like others, the jaundice colored....etc, I don't think it fits. Jaundice and drug. A little too harsh for describing such serenity. Also, nice rhythm. There's some ...

Hey there. Good day (or night), I'm hoping? This is really nice, sad and obviously heartfelt. However, like Classy said (hey, buddy!) I really don't get why you put your ...

Hey there, Dreamer. I have to say this is my favorite poem I've read all day, or at least one of them. The topic is very cliche, but whoa, did ...

Hey there, Lill. Nice to meet you. On to the review. I'm a socializer...waste so much time talking. Like right now. Anyhoo. This is a quite short, and good poem. ...

Hi there, Bpq! Nice poem. By the way, welcome to YWS. It's always nice to see a new member. Boy, did this hurt my eyes. XD. Probably just me. The ...

Hi, iateyourdogx67. If I had a dog I'd be very scared :O. Lol. Just kidding ;) Anyways... :) This is a good poem. In some places, however, like the last ...