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Hey, hey. Nice to meet you. Hope your day is going good, eh? Well, this is nice. Because this is a short poem, I notice mistakes easier. Some of your ...

So, hi there. Nice to meet you :D I won't be as brief as the others--I'm barely short on time. I have eons. Not literally. First off, your capitalizing and ...

Hey, there. Hope you're day is going well...and still is, after the harsh review I'm about to type. So, I didn't really like this, in truth, it was one of ...

On Wrestling Before I met The Mat I was nothing. After I met The Mat I was something. Life was simple now I has meaning. No, no, no. It would ...

This...has been very well covered by that wonderful writer Velvet up above. I will mention, as she did, I don't think you really get what some of these words mean. ...

Hey, Icu! So, hope you're having a good day. :D Anyways. On to my review of your little poem here ^_^ Okay, I liked this. I really did. Just because ...

Hi. Nice to see you again. :D Okay, so first off, I actually really liked this. The font annoyed me a ton though. On the line after "you could turn ...

So, I chuckled as well. XD. Hi, there, Tranq. Good idea to write a poem instead of actually screaming your head off at them. Okay, so basically grammar, and one ...

Hi, there, and welcome to YWS. Now, on to my review of your poem. So, this was very nice. It had a nice calming effect...and I felt like...hmm, peaceful. I ...

The End of a Dream They tell me to move along, that it's time to move on, but I can't help but linger at the gravesite. Others come to bury ...

Hi, Catcher. If that's what you go by D: So many people, so many nicknames. Argh. Anyways, nice to meet you. To the review, now... I can clearly understand the ...

Hi, there, Halcyon. Welcome to YWS, too. So, I think this has some good parts (which Imp mentioned above), but you really don't put them together. There seems to be ...

Hi, Percy. Welcome to YWS...and nice to see you again. I agree with everyone else. Completely. Do NOT chat speak. It is, for one, against the rules. Sort of. And ...

Hey there, Percy. Nice to meet you, by the way. Now let's get started. I...didn't like this. I'm sorry. The repetition does not cause any suspense, or 'effect' us like ...

Hi, Aly. Nice to meet you and welcome to YWS. I hope you're enjoying yourself here. Anyways. So, this made me think of werewolves and Twilight for some reason. Which ...