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Re: What I Was Missing
I really enjoyed this poem. It had a wonderful message to readers of all ages. I believe everyone has to go through a period in their life where they question ...
Jan 4, 2014 -
Re: My Dreams
JaneAusten! I love this so much.... as with all our other poems. And you know what?? I don't think that poem is self centered at all..... you're truly concerned.... and ...
Dec 10, 2011 -
Re: Before
Great job JaneAusten! I have to say I can totally relate! I believe Christianity is one thing that isn't just a one time deal, that's for sure........ it's all of ...
Dec 10, 2011 -
Re: River Shore
MOIMOW!! I LOVE THIS PIECE SO MUCH! The rhythm and rhyming are just perfect, and I don't think you need to do anything to change it. I didn't even see ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: Waiting
I really enjoyed reading this. It was very interesting because I can relate to all of it...every single word! Nitpick time! yaay! First of all, if this is a definite ...
Sep 16, 2011 -
Re: I Am Here
I gotta say, "GOOD JOB!!" The highlight of reading this poem was how it flowed extremely well. One part that I didn't really understand was: I'm the one who makes ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: You Don't
This was so sad! Brought many things to my mind, that's for sure! :) I loved all the emotion you put into this. I don't really see anything to change! ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: Best Friends
This was a cute poem! :) I loved it. Near the end, I think you kind of got desperate for rhyming words though. It's just what I thought. Keep writing!! ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: Goodbye
I don't really think I need to do much reviewing this. Although, I did find it odd when you would put commas in, but, then, no periods. So, I think ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: I tried
I just have to say that I really related to this. Although it didn't give me any deep emotions, and I don't think I will remember this poem, and it ...
Jul 21, 2011 -
Re: Mine.
I really liked this a whole lot. But, I do think that the length was waaaaay too long. I think you could have done a better job sorting through your ...
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: Trust
This was so sad. :( The emotion you put behind this was amazing. But, you seriously need to focus on your punctuation and grammar!! Others have really picked up on ...
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: Please Come Back
Oh this is WONDERFUL!!!! Just like the review before mine, I can definitely relate to this wholeheartedly. :( But, it kind of made me wonder what the background to this ...
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: The story of your life
Wow. I'll just add to all of the comments. This piece actually made me feel really sad for some reason. Like, life has no purpose, we have no meaning here. ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Booty Shorts
Hahaha, this poem just made my day! It was great. I agreed with every single word of it. The only part I wasn't too fond of was the very end.... ...
Jun 14, 2011
