MissGamer8

Thank you! I really value your opinion! But with rewriting I read what you said and thought if it make sense to me. I didn't use all your suggestions but ...

Thank you! :) This is so old I forgot about it haha. But yeah this wasn't a true story but it was about someone that thought they were better than ...

I rewrote it! Check it out and tell me what you think! :)

(Realized that there was a reply button!) Thank you so much, this is an unedited draft (threw it up because review day was coming up haha) but thank you for ...

Hey thank you again for all your nitpicks! Gosh, you make me sound like a terrible writer haha, but I know I need more improvement! I am rewriting both chapters ...

Thank you for your nip picks! :) I will certainly reread it and edit more. I always forget the smell sense... haha. But thank you for drawing my attention to ...

Hey, thank you for the feedback. In this story there is a reason for everything. I will research about the treatment of amnesia. I wrote this in a seat of ...

Thank you so much, this is an unedited draft (threw it up because review day was coming up haha) but thank you for the corrections. Um, if you look on ...

This was definitely more interesting to read than I thought when I first figured out it was an article about mirrors:) I enjoyed it and it wasn't boring and fairly ...

Oh my god! Thanks guys! Much appreciated. To me even just looking at the first chapter it sounds terrible but I guess that's the little editor inside me. I'm starting ...

This is a nice poem. It has a nice flow in the story, the stages in which the darkness is consuming you. Then leave people with new questions to think ...

hmmm... I'll have to agree with the last person but there are a few things that have me confused. Its that you change your rhyming scheme. Kind of like you ...

This song was inspired by Taylor Swift. She's my favorite singer.

This story is good, but it's incomplete! I want to read what happens next! So finish! Lol, it's a pretty good start to a romance story! Nice

The beginning rhyme is a little off. The lines don't rhyme at all, and there are parts in there that don't seem to work with each other. It needs a ...