MissCaroline

I really liked the description in this! It was really cute and sweet. You highlighted the points perfectly with the "What If's". The story had so many details and I ...

Along with what Kayfortnight had said, I believe this chapter has to be expanded on a ton. I don't know if we can fully classify this as a chapter yet. ...

This is probably the best story I have read on this site so far. This was truly amazing and I know it will stick with me for a while. I ...

This story was really depressing and dark. I like these kind of stories that actually make me feel something. I really enjoyed the suspense that was going on throughout. It ...

Short and sweet and to the point. I don't believe a poem has to have a certain length as long as it has meaning. This poem has meaning. I enjoyed ...

This was a very powerful poem. I have just got done with my Holocaust learning section in school, so I have more of an understanding on this topic. I really ...

Ohhh how I love Harry Potter. I'll never forget the moment I finished the series and I was just like, "Well now what?" This was very entertaining to read. I ...

Oh how I love dark, deathly stories... This was so evil in every way and I loved every bit of it. I could feel myself actually wincing when they cut ...

Hello Madame! Firstly, the descriptors you used in this poem were phenomenal. It helped me really connect to the writing and it gave me a clear mind picture. I love ...

Woahhh! This was a very saddening poem! I liked the emotional feelings it gave you when you read it. I feel like the suicide at the end is definitely a ...

This poem flowed so beautifully! Everything with the breaks in the lines and the stanzas was perfect. I enjoyed reading this because I could feel her sadness. The description of ...

I personally use repetition a lot in my writing. I mostly use it to get an important point or feeling across. I could feel that in this! I could feel ...

Awwwww! Why can't anyone be this sweet to me? :) This was so lovely! I got all mushy inside! The last stanza for me was the best. It was just ...

Holy long lines! I feel like before I say anything else, you should make the lines shorter, like break them up more. I also think you should include a second ...

I could sort of relate to this poem because I too have questions about the Higher Being and religion and all that jazz. It's all a mystery to me really. ...