Miraculor77

Hi Erennaci! I saw this in the Literary Spotlight and thought it would be interesting to check out. Also, the title is intriguing. I noticed some grammatical mistakes and thought ...

Hi! I think I promised a (long) while back that I would come back to the first chapter of this story to start from the beginning, so I'm finally here. ...

Hi! First off, this piece is extremely relatable. :) I felt the main character's sorrow at the end of summer. I couldn't find anything particularly wrong with the writing, but ...

Hi! I'm here to review this chapter (part?) of yours. :) Let's get this piece out of the Green Room, shall we? He deserves some kind of title, especially coming ...

Hi! I was looking through the Green Room when I saw this, and the sci-fi label caught my eye. I have to say, this is a wonderful story. I like ...

Hi! I really liked this piece, and the last chapter I read from this series was, I think, 41.2. I guess I'll put this on my To Read list so ...

Hi. I can't really write short stories yet, so I really admire your ability to do so. I really like the writing, it's smooth, with vivid description. The idea is ...

Hi! I'm Mira, and I'm here to review your work. I also checked your profile, and it says that you are from South Africa. American English is slightly different from ...

Hi! I was looking for first chapters of stories (I don't particularly like jumping into the middle of the story randomly) and this title caught my eye. First things first, ...

Hi! This is a good story, very relatable. I read a variety of genres, but most of them fall under the category of fiction, so I totally agree. :) Now ...

Hi! Mira here for a review. This is a good prologue; I like how the main character's memories make up most of the chapter. It's very well written, so I'm ...

Hi! Mira here for a review. I'm just gonna go paragraph by paragraph here. Paragraph 2: Character 2A stopped in front of a door, it was twice her height and ...

Woah! This is a very good story, so you don't have much to worry about when it comes to presenting this in your class. Because it is really good, I'm ...

Hiya! Mira here for a review. I'm going to get straight to the point. Right below "Chapter 1," "Annalesa" is written. But in the rest of the chapter, "Annalisa" is ...

Hello! Mira here for a review. So the first thing I noticed was how the sentences were choppy and felt slightly abrupt. I like that you can say so much ...