Miraculor77

Hi! I saw this in the Green Room and the title seemed interesting, so here I am. :) I'll just be reviewing this as I read it. Let's get to ...

Hi! first impressions This is really good for something that was written in 15 minutes from such a strange prompt. Your writing was slightly choppy in some parts, but I ...

Hi! My name is Mira, and I'll be reviewing your chapter part today. It's been a long, long time since I've done a review, and I haven't read the previous ...

Hey again! I know I've been extremely behind on reviewing this, so I thought I'd use this time of social distancing to catch up. I'll just go through this and ...

Hi again! I thought I'd break my own promise and finish this review before really trying to leave. I read the chapter yesterday, so I'll be rereading it and giving ...

Hey again! I just noticed that this was in the Green Room since last year. Like how??? This story should have more readers, definitely. Well, I'll get it out of ...

Hi! I actually haven't read this chapter before, so I'll be looking at everything for the first time. I'll read and give comments/critiques as I go, then give my final ...

Hi! I figured that if I was going to review chapters 3 and 4, I might as well start from the beginning. By the way, I'm so sorry for reviewing ...

Hey! I saw the latest chapter of this in the Green Room and thought I'd start from the beginning. I'll give comments/critiques as I read. Maybe they should have. Maybe ...

Hi! The reviews below already went over many of the things I thought, but I figured I would mention a few other questions I had. So, Ky was abducted, and ...

Hi! I know it's been a while since I last reviewed, but due to an internet situation, I wasn't able to read this. I'll read through this and offer comments/critiques, ...

Hi! I saw the latest chapter out and wanted to come back to the first to start from the beginning. I'll read through this and drop comments/critiques/nitpicks as I go. ...

Hi EverLight! I'm going to warn you right here: This review might suck. This is (I think) my first time reviewing a poem, so please comment and tell me if ...

Hi Katnes! I'm going to read through this and comment/critique as I go. Jaden blinked, and opened his eyes. The comma is not necessary. My brothers, Rocket , and Rex ...

Hi! I'm here to get your work out of the Green Room. :) I'm just going to read through and drop comments/critiques along the way. Most of the nitpicks are ...