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Re: Set Adrift (Part 5)
Hi! I saw this in the Green Room and the title seemed interesting, so here I am. :) I'll just be reviewing this as I read it. Let's get to ...
Feb 6, 2021 -
Re: 15 Minute Writer's Prompt
Hi! first impressions This is really good for something that was written in 15 minutes from such a strange prompt. Your writing was slightly choppy in some parts, but I ...
Jan 30, 2021 -
Re: Within My Blood (Chapter 8-part 2)
Hi! My name is Mira, and I'll be reviewing your chapter part today. It's been a long, long time since I've done a review, and I haven't read the previous ...
Sep 16, 2020 -
Re: A Fleeting Eternity - Chapter Two
Hey again! I know I've been extremely behind on reviewing this, so I thought I'd use this time of social distancing to catch up. I'll just go through this and ...
Mar 18, 2020 -
Re: Butterfly Wings - Prologue - Spores
Hey! I saw the latest chapter of this in the Green Room and thought I'd start from the beginning. I'll give comments/critiques as I read. Maybe they should have. Maybe ...
Jan 15, 2020 -
Re: A Fleeting Eternity - Chapter One
Hi! The reviews below already went over many of the things I thought, but I figured I would mention a few other questions I had. So, Ky was abducted, and ...
Jan 9, 2020 -
Re: Servant of the White Sun - Chapter 2 - Shelter of the Sun
Hi! I know it's been a while since I last reviewed, but due to an internet situation, I wasn't able to read this. I'll read through this and offer comments/critiques, ...
Dec 19, 2019 -
Re: Servant of the White Sun - Chapter 1 - Shelter of the Sun
Hi! I saw the latest chapter out and wanted to come back to the first to start from the beginning. I'll read through this and drop comments/critiques/nitpicks as I go. ...
Nov 24, 2019 -
Re: Stranger In The Stars
Hi EverLight! I'm going to warn you right here: This review might suck. This is (I think) my first time reviewing a poem, so please comment and tell me if ...
Nov 13, 2019 -
Re: The Lunar Soul-Intrigue
Hi Katnes! I'm going to read through this and comment/critique as I go. Jaden blinked, and opened his eyes. The comma is not necessary. My brothers, Rocket , and Rex ...
Oct 29, 2019 -
Re: A Fight for Survival ~ Darkness Approaches Chapter 11
Hi! I'm here to get your work out of the Green Room. :) I'm just going to read through and drop comments/critiques along the way. Most of the nitpicks are ...
Oct 3, 2019 -
Re: Prologue
Hi! I'll just be reading through this and giving comments/critiques as I go for this review. I'm sorry if this feels like I'm picking your writing apart, or if the ...
Oct 2, 2019 -
Re: A Janitor's Adventure: 5.2
Hi! I'm here to get this chapter out of the Green Room. I'm just going to read it and drop comments/critiques as I go. I'm sorry if I come off ...
Sep 29, 2019 -
Re: Fallen Shields: Chapter Three: The seeing
Hi Amnesia! I'm here to help you get this piece out of the Green Room. I'm sorry if the review sounds harsh, but I'm exhausted so it probably wasn't intended. ...
Sep 29, 2019 -
Re: Flares & Fragments 1.1
Hi fraey! I'm just going to read through and offer comments and critiques as I go. I might get a little nitpicky, so I hope I don't come off as ...
Sep 29, 2019