Mindfang

Right, let's go down to business!. I can spot a few grammar errors but that can easily be fixed easily. I liked the way it flowed but it never said ...

I loved this story! It showed the grinding daily life of a student, which I have to go through almost everyday of the week. Some bits where very interesting, and ...

Holy smokes. Just.....wow. This was just so god damn awesome I can not find the words to describe it and to give it the credit it deserves. I only spotted ...

Wow! This was does change my views on a lot of things. I liked how you have woven in the pieces of experience you had with your friend. But, I'm ...

Such beautiful poem! I adored how you said to spoke to you. How it taught you about life. I can't spot any errors, but I was never good at grammar ...

I thought this was going to be funny. I thought this was going to be someone asking their parents why they gave them such a name as the one they ...

This was over all very interesting. But I didn't see many full stops? I don't know much about poetry but I'm pretty sure it kinda needs those. But I'm not ...

Well! That was something different, I can assure you. I have to say, this was not what I was expecting at all from this work. Honest to god, I thought ...

Since you reviewed my story I only thought it'd be right to return the favor! I read over the other reviews and they all said be more descriptive and I ...