Milanimo

Sure! Here are the places I spotted. "He did not sleep at all, he rocked back and forth all night while Louise slept. His waist, calf, arms and heart hurt. ...

It's fine! I have a few things on this website that just came out of the blue. It's simple inspiration that just has to be written down! Well, back to ...

Thank you! I really love reading!

Yeah I accidentally posted it(think my computer did something weird) and I didn't have time to finish it so I just added something in conclusion. But thank you for your ...

No problem!

Sorry about that! I posted it without finishing. But I intend to put the last few stanzas on it.

No problem, no ones a perfect writer!

Thanks! I wasn't sure and I didn't want to make an incorrect assumption.

Yeah I know it can be difficult to edit works sometimes. Also, no problem!

No problem! And message me whenever you need help because I love writing poems!

Hi! Thanks for your review! I wrote this in the middle of the night and then just copied and pasted it. I didn't really check for errors and the like ...

That's fine. This is a review for a device you can properly type on. Once you have access to that, feel free to consider my suggestions.

Hi! Very nicely done! I honestly cannot find any errors in the work! Your description and imagery was superb, as well as your diction. The punctuation was perfect and there ...

Sure! And that's fine! It still sounds good.

No problem! You can usually just press enter a second time to make a new stanza, but if not, there is a coding option that looks like "" in the ...